Hello everyone. I’m Yoshitaka Ishikura.I’m a sophomore at KGU.Through studying English at KGU I realized it’s important to learn many things. Some of which are; I realized that facing a person and having the courage to speak is a good way to learn English through my college life.First I will talk about my experience. After that I will talk about my friend who inspired me and made me realize many things. In conclusion I will talk about what I will do with the experience.In spring last year I talked to foreigners in English. That was my first time having a conversation with foreigners in English. However perhaps I shouldn’t call it a conversation because I couldn’t understand what he was saying or respond in English.Here’s an interesting story at the moment.My friend said to me “What’s up?” when I met him.Of course I didn’t know the meaning.I said “wait what do you mean? What’s up? …..What is UP!” I looked up and said “it’s …..sky ”He was laughing at me. After that I knew it meant hello. After this funny incident I decided I wanted to listen better, speak better and know more slang.I tried to hard work to improve especially with my speaking and listening skills.After last year’s spring I could speak in English better than I could previously. It was still not good but I could greet the exchange students. However there was another problem. I realized that even if I could speak English , this means nothing if I don’t know what to talk about!Now it’s not such a big problem because I can speak better than before but at the time I was nervous and shy. So I couldn’t have a conversation in English especially with a person I just met. Now, I will talk about my friend who inspired me. She and I have the same major. She is full of energy and is nice to everyone. A thing I was surprised with is that even as she was talking with exchange students in English, her personality was the same.Her English skills were not much higher than mine.Her style looked really brave to me.I was wondering how she does it, and how can I talk like her.After a while I noticed that when she has a conversation, she always speaks first and can switch between funny and serious.I realized that being face to face with a person and having the courage to speak are important aspects of learning English. Next year I am fortunate to have the opportunity to study abroad. I will go to a college where I will be the only Japanese person. It’s going to be very tough to study abroad. However, I won’t be afraid because I know through experience that facing people and interacting with native speakers is an important and positive aspect of learning English.
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Showing posts with label writings. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writings. Show all posts
Friday, January 30, 2009
Manuscript (rewrite ver)
Honors seminar 3
Manuscript
Good evening. Ladies and gentlemen. How are you doing?
This time I’d like to show you something really cool.
Have you been laughing recently? Laughing is a really important thing in life. Some scientists say, a person who laugh often will get ill more easily than a person who laughs a lot. Recently, There aren’t many TV shows or films that give you true humor, are there? People are starving for true humor.
So let me introduce you to this. Vi va la bam! This is humor.
A show in this DVD is not like any other comedy you’ve seen before. Vi va la bam brings you a new kind of humor.
Now you may think that” yeah everybody always says that?” So Let me show you the proof.
40% of people in the US already have this DVD set. Watching vi va la bam is part of their life now. You listen to the customers comments.
First a women who is 34 years old and house keeper, That was really amazing. Actually my family didn’t get along with each other. Everybody was doing their own thing, but after we began watching this, our family has changed. Everybody came to care about one another. I feel laughing is really important in life. A Thank you is not enough to describe our feelings!
Next A boy who is a 17 year old student. `I can definitely say that watching vi va la bam is one of the best things in my life. Vi va la bam kicks the stress out of me every time. Because of this, I became a really nice and friendly guy. I’m totally different now after seeing this sweet DVD.
See? This DVD can make life much better. If you see this, You will laugh more than ever before. Which means you are going to have a more healthy and full life.
This DVD has 6 hours of crazy and hilarious episodes. That’s longer than any other comedy DVD. If you really love the show, you can also watch the making of vi va la bam.
But don’t worry too much about it, 2 hours of bonus features are also included. Now how many disc are there: you may ask. Because of today’s advanced technology, there are only 2 discs. This DVD only needs that much. With vi va la bam episodes that you’d never see on TV. Vi va la bam with staff you’d never see on TV. You can’t miss it. And I know you won’t. We will be waiting for your call.
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Manuscript
Good evening. Ladies and gentlemen. How are you doing?
This time I’d like to show you something really cool.
Have you been laughing recently? Laughing is a really important thing in life. Some scientists say, a person who laugh often will get ill more easily than a person who laughs a lot. Recently, There aren’t many TV shows or films that give you true humor, are there? People are starving for true humor.
So let me introduce you to this. Vi va la bam! This is humor.
A show in this DVD is not like any other comedy you’ve seen before. Vi va la bam brings you a new kind of humor.
Now you may think that” yeah everybody always says that?” So Let me show you the proof.
40% of people in the US already have this DVD set. Watching vi va la bam is part of their life now. You listen to the customers comments.
First a women who is 34 years old and house keeper, That was really amazing. Actually my family didn’t get along with each other. Everybody was doing their own thing, but after we began watching this, our family has changed. Everybody came to care about one another. I feel laughing is really important in life. A Thank you is not enough to describe our feelings!
Next A boy who is a 17 year old student. `I can definitely say that watching vi va la bam is one of the best things in my life. Vi va la bam kicks the stress out of me every time. Because of this, I became a really nice and friendly guy. I’m totally different now after seeing this sweet DVD.
See? This DVD can make life much better. If you see this, You will laugh more than ever before. Which means you are going to have a more healthy and full life.
This DVD has 6 hours of crazy and hilarious episodes. That’s longer than any other comedy DVD. If you really love the show, you can also watch the making of vi va la bam.
But don’t worry too much about it, 2 hours of bonus features are also included. Now how many disc are there: you may ask. Because of today’s advanced technology, there are only 2 discs. This DVD only needs that much. With vi va la bam episodes that you’d never see on TV. Vi va la bam with staff you’d never see on TV. You can’t miss it. And I know you won’t. We will be waiting for your call.
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Writing in a other class
Good morning. Everyone. I’m W-101. it is time for the weather news. Let’s take a look at weather report.
In the MT. Today..….sunny. good for go outside. It may get up to 33 degree. Tomorrow….. rain but don’t worry about it. The rainwill stop just 11:25 a.m. Wednesday….rain. not good for hiking. Thursday…cloudy. It get up to 33 degree. It will feel hotter because of the wind will make you feel hot. So I don’t recommend go outside on Thursday. Friday and Saturday will be frippin hot day. Because of controlling shield of sunlight. Sanday …it will be acid rain all day. Stay home if you can. If you go outside, wear great armor. That’s all. Have a nice day . don’t forget rain time.
Hi. It was great boring weather news. Isn’t it? How’s it going? Guys. I’m good. So it is time for the movie review. Here we go!
Finnaly . spider-man 7 come to screen. Next spider-man use revolutionary new system. Of course you can watch the movie like ever you did. But you wear this. DDD helmet. There is another world. You can see the movie in the movie. Let me explain more. If you wear this, you can see the movie from anywhere in the movie. Yeah you can enter the spidy’s world. And you will feel every character’s emotion more close than ever. Oh are you worrying cost of DDD helmet? Don’t worry about it. You go to theater like usually you do when watch movies. The theater lend you. Of course it’s free. So enjoy the new system as times as you want. Next, let’s talk about story of this movie. Next’s enemy is also strong. The name is bean-man. And we got the picture. It is here!! Yeah I know what you wanna say. Looks not strong. But! He has a great power. Just walk close a people people laugh. That’s right . his power is making people laugh. Can spidy make people lough than bean?? It is almost story of this movie. And we have a big secret about spidy. If you don’t want to hear that. Close your ears. Did you close? Okay. Peter’s son. The name is ……potter. Will get a power like peter. And fight with him. Sounds great. Isn’t it? Coming next Friday. Don’t miss it.
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In the MT. Today..….sunny. good for go outside. It may get up to 33 degree. Tomorrow….. rain but don’t worry about it. The rainwill stop just 11:25 a.m. Wednesday….rain. not good for hiking. Thursday…cloudy. It get up to 33 degree. It will feel hotter because of the wind will make you feel hot. So I don’t recommend go outside on Thursday. Friday and Saturday will be frippin hot day. Because of controlling shield of sunlight. Sanday …it will be acid rain all day. Stay home if you can. If you go outside, wear great armor. That’s all. Have a nice day . don’t forget rain time.
Hi. It was great boring weather news. Isn’t it? How’s it going? Guys. I’m good. So it is time for the movie review. Here we go!
Finnaly . spider-man 7 come to screen. Next spider-man use revolutionary new system. Of course you can watch the movie like ever you did. But you wear this. DDD helmet. There is another world. You can see the movie in the movie. Let me explain more. If you wear this, you can see the movie from anywhere in the movie. Yeah you can enter the spidy’s world. And you will feel every character’s emotion more close than ever. Oh are you worrying cost of DDD helmet? Don’t worry about it. You go to theater like usually you do when watch movies. The theater lend you. Of course it’s free. So enjoy the new system as times as you want. Next, let’s talk about story of this movie. Next’s enemy is also strong. The name is bean-man. And we got the picture. It is here!! Yeah I know what you wanna say. Looks not strong. But! He has a great power. Just walk close a people people laugh. That’s right . his power is making people laugh. Can spidy make people lough than bean?? It is almost story of this movie. And we have a big secret about spidy. If you don’t want to hear that. Close your ears. Did you close? Okay. Peter’s son. The name is ……potter. Will get a power like peter. And fight with him. Sounds great. Isn’t it? Coming next Friday. Don’t miss it.
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Writing in speaking class
Speaking Homework
1. When we drink a Japanese tea, if a thing that is part of the powder of tea float straight. Which means it bring good luck in Japan.
2. Some people in Japan after they saw black cat, believe bring bad luck.
3. I think nothing happen after that.
4. If a black cat walked in front of me, I think something bad will happen to me.
5. Shooting star, Whistling in night, Pushing at hair whirl, Hiding own bellybutton in lightning, putting pillow at north side.
6. My parents and my grand mother told me that. They told me about answers of 5 question.
7. I think people in Japan think as people in the U.S. do. 7 is lucky number in Japan too. I don’t know why.
8. I think we don’t have that kind of number. But if I have to say that, I say 4, because 4’s pronunciation is same as a word which mean death in Japan. In Japan fortune telling is really popular. Some of them are really traditional. And they say some day or month or years are unlucky or lucky.
9. I don’t believe them, because I think if I care about that every time, it will make me sick. I believe whatever I want to believe.10. Actually it never came true to me. But opposite thing happened. After a black cat walked in front of me, I got a money from my grandmother.
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1. When we drink a Japanese tea, if a thing that is part of the powder of tea float straight. Which means it bring good luck in Japan.
2. Some people in Japan after they saw black cat, believe bring bad luck.
3. I think nothing happen after that.
4. If a black cat walked in front of me, I think something bad will happen to me.
5. Shooting star, Whistling in night, Pushing at hair whirl, Hiding own bellybutton in lightning, putting pillow at north side.
6. My parents and my grand mother told me that. They told me about answers of 5 question.
7. I think people in Japan think as people in the U.S. do. 7 is lucky number in Japan too. I don’t know why.
8. I think we don’t have that kind of number. But if I have to say that, I say 4, because 4’s pronunciation is same as a word which mean death in Japan. In Japan fortune telling is really popular. Some of them are really traditional. And they say some day or month or years are unlucky or lucky.
9. I don’t believe them, because I think if I care about that every time, it will make me sick. I believe whatever I want to believe.10. Actually it never came true to me. But opposite thing happened. After a black cat walked in front of me, I got a money from my grandmother.
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Writing in a other class
Honors English Seminar.
1.
(1)Why is debate necessary?
Because it is good way to find out the essence of a thing from many different angles and the most appropriate solution or the answer to the matter.
(2)Basic format of cross-examination debate.
1)First Affirmative construction speech. 2)Negative cross-examination. 3)First Negative constructive.4)Affirmative cross-examination. 5)Second Affirmative constructive. 6)Negative cross-examination. 7)Second Negative constructive. 8)Affirmative cross-examination 9)First negative rebuttal 10)First Affirmative rebuttal. 11) Second Negative rebuttal 12)Second Affirmative rebuttal.
(3)What is constructive speech?
Affirmative
1) Finding the problems of the present system 2) Presenting a “plan” to solve the problems. 3) Providing information that the plan will work. 4) Showing the benefits of the plan.
Negative
1) Explaining that the present system doesn’t have any problems or even if any, they are miner. 2) Explaining that the plan of the affirmative will not solve the problems. 3) Explaining the disadvantages or bad points the plan will bring about.
(4)What is rebuttal speech?
This is a turn to attack the shortcomings of the opponent’s argument. No new argument may be presented at this stage of debate. Rebuttal has to be limited to the area of argument already presented before.
(5)What is cross-examination?
This is questions and answers time. Do not state your opinions. Simply ask questions. Ask questions about the soundness of the opponent’s argument. For example, the appropriateness of their evidence and reasoning.
2. Write your own constructive speech on the topic we debated in the crass.
Proposition of policy
Resolved: That the voting age must be lowered from 20 to 18 years old.
I was in Affirmative side. I will write about Affirmative constructive speech.
Affirmative
1. Find the problems of the present voting age.
In these days many young people are not interested in political affairs. 18 and 19 years old people cannot vote and affect political affairs even though they are already working and involved in a society.
2. Find the answers how serious those problems are.
If this situation is continuing, young people who don’t think seriously about political affairs are increasing. That will be reflected in an election and the government won’t be able to take nation’s opinions good enough.
3. Find the answers that those problems cannot be solved without changing the status quo.
I didn’t make the constructive speech about this topic.
4. Find a plan to solve the problem.
Making the voting age is lowered from 20 to 18 years old.
5. Find advantage of the plan.
If the plan that 18 and 19 years old can vote is accepted, the government is able to get more attention to political affairs from young people and listen more opinions of nation. If the government can listen more nations’ opinions, it is going to be easy to reflect them to the society more perfectly.
6. Find the evidences and reasonings for the plan to be workable.
Many countries are already adopting the plan. There are records that proof good influence of the plan to political affairs. We can guess what happen if the government accepts the plan from the records.
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1.
(1)Why is debate necessary?
Because it is good way to find out the essence of a thing from many different angles and the most appropriate solution or the answer to the matter.
(2)Basic format of cross-examination debate.
1)First Affirmative construction speech. 2)Negative cross-examination. 3)First Negative constructive.4)Affirmative cross-examination. 5)Second Affirmative constructive. 6)Negative cross-examination. 7)Second Negative constructive. 8)Affirmative cross-examination 9)First negative rebuttal 10)First Affirmative rebuttal. 11) Second Negative rebuttal 12)Second Affirmative rebuttal.
(3)What is constructive speech?
Affirmative
1) Finding the problems of the present system 2) Presenting a “plan” to solve the problems. 3) Providing information that the plan will work. 4) Showing the benefits of the plan.
Negative
1) Explaining that the present system doesn’t have any problems or even if any, they are miner. 2) Explaining that the plan of the affirmative will not solve the problems. 3) Explaining the disadvantages or bad points the plan will bring about.
(4)What is rebuttal speech?
This is a turn to attack the shortcomings of the opponent’s argument. No new argument may be presented at this stage of debate. Rebuttal has to be limited to the area of argument already presented before.
(5)What is cross-examination?
This is questions and answers time. Do not state your opinions. Simply ask questions. Ask questions about the soundness of the opponent’s argument. For example, the appropriateness of their evidence and reasoning.
2. Write your own constructive speech on the topic we debated in the crass.
Proposition of policy
Resolved: That the voting age must be lowered from 20 to 18 years old.
I was in Affirmative side. I will write about Affirmative constructive speech.
Affirmative
1. Find the problems of the present voting age.
In these days many young people are not interested in political affairs. 18 and 19 years old people cannot vote and affect political affairs even though they are already working and involved in a society.
2. Find the answers how serious those problems are.
If this situation is continuing, young people who don’t think seriously about political affairs are increasing. That will be reflected in an election and the government won’t be able to take nation’s opinions good enough.
3. Find the answers that those problems cannot be solved without changing the status quo.
I didn’t make the constructive speech about this topic.
4. Find a plan to solve the problem.
Making the voting age is lowered from 20 to 18 years old.
5. Find advantage of the plan.
If the plan that 18 and 19 years old can vote is accepted, the government is able to get more attention to political affairs from young people and listen more opinions of nation. If the government can listen more nations’ opinions, it is going to be easy to reflect them to the society more perfectly.
6. Find the evidences and reasonings for the plan to be workable.
Many countries are already adopting the plan. There are records that proof good influence of the plan to political affairs. We can guess what happen if the government accepts the plan from the records.
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Tuesday, January 20, 2009
I wrote this in other class.
Position of parents
This news said about bad effect of advertising of foods to toddlers. This is part of problems that influence of TV to children. Now that influence is proofed by many experiments. For example in the U.S there is a record that people made a limit for advertising about foods and made overweight children decrease.
However maybe there is some trick in this kind of results because this is about toddlers in this case. Who are giving foods them? They are their parents. If the subjects are school children what they buy is up to them. So they can say that they buy first food or snacks because of advertising. However in this case the subjects are toddlers so we can say that their parents should have the responsibility of foods for them.
In these days we see advertising about snacks and first foods many times. However because of this situation parents have to take care of toddlers who are in time that they get influence easily.
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This news said about bad effect of advertising of foods to toddlers. This is part of problems that influence of TV to children. Now that influence is proofed by many experiments. For example in the U.S there is a record that people made a limit for advertising about foods and made overweight children decrease.
However maybe there is some trick in this kind of results because this is about toddlers in this case. Who are giving foods them? They are their parents. If the subjects are school children what they buy is up to them. So they can say that they buy first food or snacks because of advertising. However in this case the subjects are toddlers so we can say that their parents should have the responsibility of foods for them.
In these days we see advertising about snacks and first foods many times. However because of this situation parents have to take care of toddlers who are in time that they get influence easily.
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Tuesday, December 16, 2008
Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1a OR 1c
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
(See: Note 1, below)
Section 1a OR 1c
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates yy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words) | website review (rewrite) | 08.09.28 | 383 | 5 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words) | My favorite place Essay 1 | 08.10.18 | 483 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words) | Mrs.doubt fire essay | 08.11.04 | 502 | 4 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| Community life 08.11.17 (default length*) | Essay2-4: Comunity draft | 08.11.16 | 539 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶) | A secret of Kumamoto | 08.11.30 | 300 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶) | Essay 2-6 Learning with computer | 08.12.16 | 406 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| Totals | --- | --- | 2613 | 9 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.A secret of Kumamoto
I chose this because I was having fun when I was writing this blog and I wrote about what I like.2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | ||||
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | MR2-01: Mr. Doubtfire ~Family love is forever~ | 08.11.05 | 118 | It is easy to read. |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Mrs.doubt fire essay | 08.11.04 | 88 | She made me realize what should I write more. |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Mrs.doubt fire essay | 08.11.04 | 163 | They have many advice about my blog. |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.11.04 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 65 | It's simple. |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | website review (rewrite) | 08.09.28 | 190 | They are so friendly and gave me advices. |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.09.30 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 24 | It was few sentences and easy to read. |
| 648 |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- No it doesn't. Because I don't know how to do it.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I could contact with many people by giving comments. I could get many informations which I couldn't know by myself about my blogs.
3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 2-01 | BR-1 Day light Night light | 08.12.22 | 188 | 0 |
| 2-02 | BR-2 How mountains are made | 08.12.22 | 147 | 0 |
| 2-03 | BR2-3 Kidnapped at Birth. | 09.01.30 | 202 | 0 |
| 2-04 | BR2-4 Strories of Dogs | 09.01.30 | 286 | 0 |
| 2-05 | BR2-5 The magic bus ~Lost in the solor system~ | 256 | 0 | |
| 2-06 | BR2-6 The wild in The willows by Kenneth Grahame | 155 | 0 | |
| 2-07 | BR2-7 A new place to live. | 235 | 0 | |
| 2-08 | BR2-8 Robin Hood. | 167 | 0 | |
| 2-09 | BR2-9 Dr.Jekyll and Mr.Hyde | 235 | 0 | |
| 2-10 | BR2-10 A new school | 332 | 0 | |
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| --- | --- | Totals: | 2203 | 10 |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | O | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | O | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | O | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | O | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | O | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| O | |
| O | |
| O | |
| O | |
| O | |
| O | |
| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | O | |
| --- | --- |
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| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | O | |
| O | |
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | O | |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | O | |
| --- | --- |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...Sometimes I used big letter to some important words.
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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it
Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).- ...I could write firster than I could last semester.
- ...I could use many words which I have just learnd and remember them.
- ...I got better skills of using computer.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
- ...I need use more difficult words when I'm doing blogs.
- ...Maybe we should think more about reader.
- ... It's not so easy to write and write blogs but it's going to be good for ourselves some day. So keep writeing.
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