BR-2 How mountains are made

Today I read this too. I like this book. This book tell me how mountains are made just like the title. However there are many another information. That was that how the earth was changing , what is happening under ground, how earth quake happen. When I was reading this book I feel like I'm taking some high school class in English. I could know some words that I didn't know. So I could learn many things which are not only new vocabulary but also knowledge of mountains from this book. For example I learned that under the outer shell is a layer of hot, partly melted rock called magma. The rock plates float on top of the hot magma. The earth's plates are always in motion.
It was fun for me to reading this book because I could learn many things from this book.
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Dialy

Hello guys! It's been while,isn't it? How's everything going?? I'm fine. And I hope you guys too. I have many staff to do these days. I have to do Power words and this blogs and have a Christmas party and drinking. Power words is one of homework which I'm not good at it. It is kind of vocabulary practice program. Of course it's going to be good for me but you know it's kind of boring work. And hey!! this year is almost over, huh?? Time is running so freaking first,huh? Oh shoot this year is so first for me. I think that because I was so busy more than I was the previous year. But anyway I was having fun though. So many good things happened this year. Mmmm..... of course there were also bad thing. But it's OK. I hope I will having next year like this year.
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BR-1 Day light Night light

I read this book today.
Maybe you can know by title. This book is written about lights. This book said that our world is full of lights. Even though it's night there are lights. Most of lights in our world are from something which are hot and things which are not hot reflect lights from something which are hot. Then our worlds become full of lights. Even though we are in very dark night first we can not see anything but after a while we can see things.

This book was really interesting for me. This book made me think and remenber me many things. I think that a thing which most give us light is the sun. It is so hot. Maybe hot is not enough to express how hot it is. But other planet is shining as the sun. We just can not see how bright are they in day time because of the sun. But as people know , night time we can see they are not so bright but I like them and looking up sky in night.
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website review (rewrite)

Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1a OR 1c

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)	website review (rewrite)	08.09.28		383	5	0	0	0
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)	My favorite place Essay 1	08.10.18		483	0	0	0	0
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)	Mrs.doubt fire essay	08.11.04		502	4	0	0	0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)	Essay2-4: Comunity draft	08.11.16		539	0	0	0	0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)	A secret of Kumamoto	08.11.30		300	0	0	0	0
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)	Essay 2-6 Learning with computer	08.12.16		406	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---		2613	9	0	0	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

A secret of Kumamoto

I chose this because I was having fun when I was writing this blog and I wrote about what I like.

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	MR2-01: Mr. Doubtfire ~Family love is forever~	08.11.05	118	It is easy to read.
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Mrs.doubt fire essay	08.11.04	88	She made me realize what should I write more.
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Mrs.doubt fire essay	08.11.04	163	They have many advice about my blog.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	08.11.04	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	65	It's simple.
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	website review (rewrite)	08.09.28	190	They are so friendly and gave me advices.
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	08.09.30	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	24	It was few sentences and easy to read.
			648

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• No it doesn't. Because I don't know how to do it.
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• I could contact with many people by giving comments. I could get many informations which I couldn't know by myself about my blogs.
  

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	BR-1 Day light Night light	08.12.22	188	0
2-02	BR-2 How mountains are made	08.12.22	147	0
2-03	BR2-3 Kidnapped at Birth.	09.01.30	202	0
2-04	BR2-4 Strories of Dogs	09.01.30	286	0
2-05	BR2-5 The magic bus ~Lost in the solor system~		256	0
2-06	BR2-6 The wild in The willows by Kenneth Grahame		155	0
2-07	BR2-7 A new place to live.		235	0
2-08	BR2-8 Robin Hood.		167	0
2-09	BR2-9 Dr.Jekyll and Mr.Hyde		235	0
2-10	BR2-10 A new school		332	0
2-11
2-12
2-13
2-14
2-15
2-16
2-17
2-18
---	---	Totals:	2203	10

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	O
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	O
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	O
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	O
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	O
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	O
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	O
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	O
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)		O
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)		O
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	O
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	O
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? __8_ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?		O
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?		O
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? __O_ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?		O
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? _O__ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		O
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? __O_ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...Sometimes I used big letter to some important words.
2. ...
3. ...

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• ...I could write firster than I could last semester.
• ...I could use many words which I have just learnd and remember them.
• ...I got better skills of using computer.
  

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• ...I need use more difficult words when I'm doing blogs.
• ...Maybe we should think more about reader.
• ... It's not so easy to write and write blogs but it's going to be good for ourselves some day. So keep writeing.
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
   
3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
   

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I wrote this in other class!!

Hello everyone. I’m sophomore in KGU. Today I ‘d like to talk about a things which I realized it’s important to learn language through studying English in this college.
I realized that facing with a person and having courage to speak are meaningful to learn English through my college life. First I will talk about my experience. After that I will talk about my friend who inspired me and made me realize that. In conclusion I will talk about what I will do with the experience.Firstly I will talk about my experience. In spring last year I talked with another country people in English. That was first time having a conversation with another country people in English. Might be it didn’t deserve to call a conversation because I couldn’t understand what were he saying and speak in English.Here’s interesting story at the moment.
My friend said to me “What’s up?” when I met him.Of course I didn’t know the meaning.
I was “wait what do you mean? What’s up? …..What is UP!” I looked up and said “it’s …..sky ”He was laughing at me. After that I knew that means hello. After this funny accident I though I want to listen better, speak better, know more slung. I tried to hard work to improve especially speaking and listening skills.After spring last year I could speak in English better than spring.
It was still not good but I could greet exchange students. However there was another problem.
I realized that it’s nothing even I could speak English if I don’t have any idea to talk about!
Now it’s not big problem because I can speak better than before. But at the time I was nerves and shy. So I couldn’t have conversation in English especially with a person whom I first met.
Secondly I will talk about my friend who inspired me. She is in same major and full of energy and nice to everyone. A thing I surprised is that even as she is talking with exchange student in English she won’t change nothing that.Her English skills was not so higher than me.Her style was looked like really bravely for me.I was wondering how she is doing that and how can I talk like her.After while I noticed that when she have a conversation always she talk first and can switch funny and serious.And I realized that facing with a person and having courage to speak are meaningful to learn English. In conclusion, fortunately I could have opportunity to study abroad. I will go to a college where there is no Japanese without me. It’s going to be very tough study abroad. However I won’t be afraid that because I know what is the meaningful thing to learn English.
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Essay 2-6 Learning with computer

Hello every body. How are you doing? I'm fine. A computer is used anywhere in these days. For example they are being used in school, college, office and library. Maybe we can not live without computers anymore. Most of each family has their own computer in Japan now. I'm thinking that perhaps each person will have their own computer in 20 years. So this time I would like to write about computers and why are they so popular now and what they can. And I'm going to write about what I learned from computers.

First, I will write about what they have. Recent computers have so many function. Maybe that was not so many when they were on sale. I think that with only several decades their functions have evolved into really great functions. Now they can support writing some report with a program which is called Microsoft Office Word or Microsoft Office Excel. These kind of functions are really useful especially for us I mean for students or maybe some business men.

As I wrote they have so many functions. I want to pick up one function and write about it. Maybe this is the biggest program in functions which computers have. It's Internet. This is so useful. This function make computer's possibility change into unlimited because it is able to bring many function from Internet. And it can connect people in all over the world with some website. For example face book is a one of famous website which can make friends in all over the world. If you use the face book even you separate with your friend you can keep in touch with them.

Next is about a difficulty with using computer. For me I'm having difficulty with using computer a lot. Computers are really useful for me and help me many times. But sometimes they are annoying me. Some time they erase my date or my report. It won't happen a lot but it really make me mad.

In conclusion, I will write about what I learned from computers. Computer made me realized many things. For example I learned many viewpoint with many opinion in Internet. They have a lot of informations. But I think that it's up to us to how much we learn from there. So I will try to learn something from there till get a answer what I want.
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out line

Introducction:
about internet
Body:
what it has
Body:
difficulty
Conclution:
how am I using that
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free writing

I learnd many things with computers. Some of which is;I'm going to write about internet. Now, there are million web sites in internet. They have a information for each websites. I think that I could learn almost anythhing from there. However , it's not so easy to find the answer you want untill you get used to because there a lot of information.
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brain strom

internet
word
blog
serch system
music
face book
gmail
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